More Than You Know

by ibelievedhim   Aug 27, 2009


All the time when I feel all alone
These tears I cry and I beg you please
As I turn back to watch you fade away
The shock brings me to my knees

You say it's now or never as I stand so close
I go out all the time, but I can't and I won't
Now to face my fears as I stand on the edge
It's time for me to bleed it out, but I don't

Don't you notice how I feel?
I try so hard just to please a friend
I let it out, but rejection stings so bad
I back away, the wounds won't ever mend

I should have told you face to face
That loving you was never a mistake
It felt so good to fall into your arms
I just never thought that I would break

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    I like how you potrayed love in this piece, it's always confusing. Very well written, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by Gness

    Most things that fall break in their own ways with rejection or hurt i wish those feelings werent yours. This poem described them deeply well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Katie,

    Love is the most overwhelming emotion a person can have and the one who is in our heart has the power to either have us soar above the clouds or throw us into the darkest pits of hell....If they care enough, they'll never let you go down there, hunni.

    You wrote this down really well...good job:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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