I remember these nights..& each line is a
loud cry for some peace to come..nicely done
with the form...take care.

Sylvia
You did a fantastic job with this club challenge. The feelings from your words cut right through my heart.
Love Cindy

Silvia,

I made one this morning also, after I read the one Melody made. It is a nice format isn't it?

This is a really sad poem and one I would not expect from someone your age. Usually it's the young people calling upon the parents or grandparents for this kind of help.
I don't know if your parents are still alive. My parents are about the same age as you and they have none left and often they feel a little lost, because they have no one that cares like a parent does left in their life.
I guess you are feeling a little lost too, aren't you?

I miss your comments,

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

I loved this Sylvia... A poem from the heart. We all feel this way I think. Lol. It could be a prayer, I dont know , but I just love how the poem has been expressed/written! Very heartfelt . We ALL need "faith, hope and love" to live our lives happily and with purpose.

Very well written Sylvia... and a brilliant job on the challenge!

All the best,
Olwin :)

Silvia,

Indeed now I read it the second time I realize it is not a call on parental help, but more a dedication to a lover.
Thanks for the explanation:)
Indeed we all need love at every stage of our lives, that goes without saying.

*hugs*

Ingrid

A nicely penned write. You stepped up to the challenge and created art
Very enjoyable

This is exactly how I feel. You capture a lot of emotion in here. 5/5

Each line reflects the title perfectly--I don't know if theres much more I can say but great work, you did great with this form and brought something new to the table.