Home Calling (Joseph's Star)

by Lonely Rider   Aug 27, 2009


Home Calling

..............Warm
..........Lush garden
.....Twinkling smiling dew
...Porch awaits my arrival
blossoms singing lonely song
.........slowly I recall
............memories
...............home

**The Joseph's Star form
This poem has no rhyme, and is written according to syllable counts. Syllables are 1, 3, 5, 7, 7, 5, 3, and 1. The poem may be written on any subject, be center aligned, has no stanza limit, and should have complete statements in each line.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I've seen this style all over the place but none as beautiful as the one you've written. I loved reading this. I admire you so much for doing this simply because I can't lol. A very lovely poem hun. Great work :) Nik

  • 15 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That's magnificent and the imagery is so realistic.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    At your part of the world nature must be absolutely beautiful:)
    I could see it all in my mind, trough this poem.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This poem is comfort thinking of home. You did a great job. I loved the feel of the read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a beautiful piece. Graet job on the club challenge as well. I can feel your homesickness.
    Love Cindy

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