Got all types of Angered Passion,
And you'll be the death of me
While I sit here, confined with jealousy
But jealousy will be the best of me

*This was my favorite part. I think you are really good with rhyming. You had both end rhyme and internal rhyme which is hard for some people. One thing I would change is how you randomly capatilized words in your stanzas, that threw me off a little. Other than that I think you did a great job with expressing how you feel about this person and how she makes you feel. I think you expressed your emotions very clearly and I can relate to some of the things you said. This was a very well written poem. Keep it up hun. I'm glad I read it. Nik*