Incurable Optimism.

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 29, 2009


--------------------Doubt
-------------stained my soul,
-----------exempted life's light,
---------until the beauty of hope
-------------infected me with
------------------positive
------------------thoughts

----------------------A
-----------------disease of
--------------pure optimism;
------------forever incurable,
---------------invulnerable;
---------------immune for
--------------------life.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    This is very nice. As a deeply pessimistic person, well, realistic, i wish i can be more optimistic.
    Thoughtful write. And the title is simple genius. Keep on being an incurable optimist.

    Peace, W. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ohh I wish I had such incurable optimism... may be thats another way to lead a happy life...
    very beautifully penned... nice choice of words :)

    //forever incurable,
    ---------------invulnerable;
    ---------------immune for
    --------------------life.
    //
    ^^lovely lined :D

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Ooo, I like it. It's cute. :D I like the style you have it shown as well. I know the dashes are just so you can get it in that shape, but I think the dashes make it seem like the poem is moving, like a shooting star.

    It made me smile. It's like optimism is a bad thing which is funny because the poem's about being an optimist. I like the irony of it. Great job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Temps
    Great job on the form. Very meaningful words. Something so many need to think about.
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What a inspirational poem Temps, absolutely beautiful. I really liked the format this was written in, it caught my eye and held my attention. Also, I like how you said it was a disease, and used good wording like "infected" and words like that that gave a clearer description. A joy to read, although it was pretty short, it held much uplifting messages. 5/5 from me, take care.

    ~MaryAnne

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