by Courageous Dreamer Aug 29, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
--------------------Doubt |
This is very nice. As a deeply pessimistic person, well, realistic, i wish i can be more optimistic. |
by Lonely Rider
Ohh I wish I had such incurable optimism... may be thats another way to lead a happy life... |
Ooo, I like it. It's cute. :D I like the style you have it shown as well. I know the dashes are just so you can get it in that shape, but I think the dashes make it seem like the poem is moving, like a shooting star. |
by Cindy
Temps |
What a inspirational poem Temps, absolutely beautiful. I really liked the format this was written in, it caught my eye and held my attention. Also, I like how you said it was a disease, and used good wording like "infected" and words like that that gave a clearer description. A joy to read, although it was pretty short, it held much uplifting messages. 5/5 from me, take care. |