Wow..what a difficult format!

You did great on this, Silvia:)

I love roses too, but really all flowers, ha ha. In Holland flowers are cheap and so my home is always filled with bouquets!

A bouquet, stunning display,
babies breath, their bed.

^^
My son's breath smelled like apple, for a very long time. He ate what we ate and it was really strange he could eat garlic and curry and still smell that way!
They say all babies smell sweet, to make sure the parents love them. I always hugged my lil one to death and indeed he always smelled so sweet....an unearthly, spellbinding perfume that is only connected to babies.

Sorry for rambling on always, I cannot help it, lol. Beautiful poem, just beautiful:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful write... just awesome in fact. Nothing can compare with a beautiful rose, and it's perfume.... and this beautiful picture you have created! Excellent piece Sylvia :)

Sylvia
What a awesome form....you did a fantastic job on the club challenge. Beautiful words paint such a wonderful picture for the mnds eye....I love when ladies are getting married and have baby's breath in their hair :)
Excellent!
Love Cindy

Thanks agains for the explanation about the baby breath, ha ha ha!

I did not know it was a flower!

Like the looks and the flow of this form. Really beautifully done.

Beautiful poem. very rose :) 5/5

Sorry, i meant rosy.

'babies breath, their bed.'
`This was a very very unique line, and a great metaphor. Absolutely loved it! You did amazing!

A very beautiful write Sylvia. All I see in my mind are roses :) Great work!

I like roses and you have painted a lovely
picture. Well done with the form, it sounds
hard to do it but after reading it I have the
motivation to try it..thanks & good job!