Wow i feel the passon and love in your words it beautfuly written. never stop writting...

Although this is a love poem, it's not as typical as other love poems. It's unique, doesn't bore the reader, and the flow is smooth. liked it, 5/5 no doubt. Peace, W.

I really enjoyed the style of this poem, very well done with an intensity of emotion. excellent!

Full with love... Great job, keep up this good work (5/5)