A ver strong and emotional write =]
Very good job, the format suits the piece very well!

See now this doesn't rhyme but its the best one I've read because its true and from your heart. You didn't force the words and you made me remember all the times I was hurt by love and how it made me feel just like this. Or how you want something or someone so bad but you just can't have them. I would change the slang though like "wanna" to "want to" it just hurts the poem a little bit.

This one I'll vote because its awesome 5/5 nicely done hope to read more soon enough :)