Perfect Day (Lira)

by Sylvia   Aug 30, 2009


It is an exquisite day,
in every way possible, picture perfect.
Flowers blooming, sweet bouquet,
they have the desired affect.
Day dreams, longing for you, caused me to reflect.

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Lira
5 lines syllables 7, 11, 7, 7, 11
Rhyme scheme ababb

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  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I can feel it & it creates a smile, a sense of
    peace when the day is good. You did well
    with the form & at the same time brought
    out the message...good write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful Lira Sylvia ......reading your poem made me reflect back to those times when I use to enjoy the flowers.
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Sounds like the PERFECT day to me as well! Such a refreshing write, very beautifully written. I hope that you enjoyed a day such as this one youve wrote about. Well done Sylvia. (:

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful Lira, Silvia.

    The only remark I could make is that in the last line caused should be causes imo, because all of the poem is present tense, but I could be wrong here!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Colm, I reworded the first line. Thanks.

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