You have a very sincere and gentle way of writing, I enjoy it very much! Your words create a mood that is very pleasing!

Ouchh..the pain was beautifully highlighted. Deana was right it was very softly written yet filled with tons of emotions. Keep writing..:-)

I would have to say i am in the same mood of writing currently although we expressed it somehow differently through words usage. I tried not to show the emotions too much but lol i think i failed.

For some reason, i dont know why the name sounds familiar to me...

This is very beautifully written. =) You have a talent, and I can't wait to read the next part (this is only part 1, right?). Please continue it if it is, I'd like to read what else you have to say about this unknown person.

P.S. Thanks for the comments =)

You were perfect

*I love this line. I know it's very simple but it says alot to me. I can remember thinking people were perfect than they hurt me.*

And the nights seemed too long
When one call could never be enough
So you held on to the picture of me
That you've always kept so close to your heart

*I love this stanza sooo much. I can really relate to what you are saying here. This was such a lovely poem and your memories are beautiful and I'm glad you shared them with us. I think you did a wonderful job here again. Keep it up hun. You have an amazing talent. Nik*

This was very powerfull..
it was writeen very good..
keep up the nice wrk .

Absolute spot-on description of earthly love. I had almost forgotten what it was like!

Thank you for these words,
Forester