by Sylvia
If this is true, and that someone struck blows, then you need to be rid of them, once and for all. Never take them back, because it won't stop. I really hope this was just a poem and not a chapter from your life. |
by Cindy
Very sad poem. If love is tearing you apart then it is not a thing to stay in.....The twist at the end is sad also. playing games with hearts can hurt more then the 2 involved. |
This is a great write dear and a very good message too. Its always right to move on, its always hard but in the end a move made for the good and only future will answer that...so y putting present in pain. |
Moving on is the tough part but necessary when it ends you know it. Good write |
by Dreamofolwin
Very well written and expressed... you're right , move on... life has more to offer, and you deserve the best. You're a winner! Keep smiling, and keep believing. A great write. |
by Freedom
Amazing !!!!!! |
by misti
I loved this poem keep it up! |
by Em
People should just tell the truth even if it hurts us. 5/5, Em |