A great poem, and although i can't give you constructive critism i believe that a long distance relationship is very difficult to mantain but when he comes back it only grows deeper
JAGx

It was a really deep poem that describes a personnal experience.
And personnally, I find it hard to stay away from the lover for a long time cos for me love needs to be fed with that direct contact, the eyes contact and the whole body language of the two lovers that distance would never replace it. I hope I helped well :)

Its a nice heartfelt piece.

think the title should have been 'our loss' rather than 'our lose'

I loved it 5/5 the flow dose get a little rough near the end but I don't know much so I'd take the advice from the others :)