Comments : I loved our Differences

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaila

    Aw this is super cute! Opposites for sure attract. Reminds me of me and my boyfriend. :) I think maybe the flow needs a little bit of work and maybe throw in a little more emotion. And when I say this I don't mean cliche stuff. For instance (not relating to your poem)...
    1. "He swept me off my tired feet like a night in shining armor" rather than
    2. "He acted like my prince in my own cinderella story."
    Understand by adding details and structure your not cliche and it makes the poem pop nice job!
    5/5