by Krathia Sep 1, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
We dreamt in darkness, |
by The Prince
I won't baby you. You have a lot to learn but I think you're a raw talent, your work has a distinct human touch and whilst this poem failed to shine in some places, I loved the tenacity in your words and the vunerability here. I'm usually a big cynic of poems like this, I used to write them; I still do, I feel this of a release, a personal piece -- I think you probably wrote this inspired by some deep feeling because I think it shows. Onto the actual poem. |
by Nee
I love it! I really do. |
I agree with Ray. Fantastic wording. and a deserved win. Congrats. |
I hate corniness it always sounds insincere yet I read this poem and I was so surprised the word beautiful was jumping in my mind and what I found fascinating was what I had just read was written by a poet who is a 16 year old young lady. Love its laid-backness and I know you are a good poet as I have read your winning entries in the competition suspect I have even voted for a few. I think this though is exceptional and I am going to put it forward for this weeks comp. id it has not already been entered and give it its excellence label of 5/5 truly I love good poetry and this is excellent 5/5 RayS |
Oh my gosh, I'm in awe. This piece was wonderful. |