Comments : Leave Me Alone

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Learning is apart of life
    & I learned from you everyday
    Open up the front door
    Their won't be nothing left I have to say

    I loved it, a great way to end another fantastic poem. Just a suggestion, the last line could be 'There's nothing left to say' TO make it flow easier. Keep it up :)