I can definitely feel the pain screaming through this poem! :(
The poem in itself needs a little working on though, it would be much easier to read and follow it the sentences were about the same length (I know that it is very hard to achieve). But it is an amazing poem and i think it deserves 5/5

Wow this is just so sad .It expresses what you were feeling so well it that deserves no less than 5/5 Very good job expressing yourself

~xcoryx~

That's such a sad piece. I'm so sorry for your loss and the pain you've endured..

Amazing write

The saddness is so clear in every line and the pain in undeniable in every verse.
Beautifully penned in every sense of those two words. The emotions are exploding over each stanzas.
5/5

I love this poem but my favorite stanza was

"Glass, she realized, is everywhere as she shouts his name,
She walks alongside the bridge, and runs to the rail.
A black figure appears several feet below,
And her feet ran to it without fail."

5/5