by Courageous Dreamer Sep 2, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Depression--how strange it is for you |
A thoughtful poem,which reminds us that sometimes,we do not necessarily have control over everything,however,hope is always an option. |
I really like the way you went with this piece Temps, comparing an unfamiliar emotion with something like braille, which truly many of us would not know. A very unique comparison to me. I also enjoy the hopeful ending, too many don't see that when they are strapped down by depression. I think you have penned something many can relate to, nice work. |
I really enjoyed this poem, it was written so well and you expressed so much emotion. |
by Dreamofolwin
A very unique write... so well written and expressed . I Loved it! How you used braille to describe depression blinding us. Excellent job :) |
by Lady Nik
I like how your last line of your first stanza and the last line of your last stanza both said "in the end" I don't know if you did that on purpose but I liked it. This was a very well written poem. The diction wasn't as difficult as some of your other poems but I think that's good. This was a simple poem and that made me like it even more. Great work honey :) Nik |