Comments : Fly

  • 15 years ago

    by Black Heart Still Beating

    Oh My Gosh! thats so unfair! .. Well all you ppl who read this poem of mine and this comment of mine,
    the words of the poem where SUPPOSED to spell out the wrord "FLY" but after I spent like 20 min doing that it just make it like this :( GRR thats so unfair it took me 2 days to just figer out how to do that. well w.e hope u like it anyway. **bri

  • I love the style and format of this poem =) Keep writing!!

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    So true. every girl wants to fly once in her life. the beginning of ur poem i could see be the beginning of a song. good job.

    victoria