by jojo Sep 2, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
If I fall to the ground will you save me? |
I definately like the repetition I think when its done write it makes a poem that much better. Flow was great and the questions you asked I believe everybody thinks about when they fall in love. If something goes wrong will they be there for me? Great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Em
I really likes the layout of this poems and the words :) x |