Sultry Evening

by Lonely Rider   Sep 3, 2009


Sultry Evening

Starlets quietly peep
from ebony curtain,
smiling mischievously
eager to sprinkle
dream-dusts,

Crystal springs
mirror
glowing halo,
a cascade of
silky moonbeams,

Draped in velvet gown,
aroma of
rain-soaked earth
embraces the
sultry evening.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Second to None

    I ussually dont go for nature poems but i really enjoyed this one. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A uniquely woven piece, I really got lost in your words and descriptions. I especially liked "dream-dust", I had to smile at that! Keep up the amazing work, never give up your gift of writing....

    5/5 from me, take care and God bless you!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This whole poem works towards the last words and is almost like a song..very serene and so peaceful:)

    Well done!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You have such vivid descriptions here, it made such a beautiful poem in the end. Very nature like. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a beautiful piece. Your words paint a very vivid picture for the reader.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

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