You have captured the essences of a "sultry" evening. Reminds me of when it is hot and humid here. Well done.

Raj
What a beautiful piece. Your words paint a very vivid picture for the reader.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

You have such vivid descriptions here, it made such a beautiful poem in the end. Very nature like. Well done.

This whole poem works towards the last words and is almost like a song..very serene and so peaceful:)

Well done!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A uniquely woven piece, I really got lost in your words and descriptions. I especially liked "dream-dust", I had to smile at that! Keep up the amazing work, never give up your gift of writing....

5/5 from me, take care and God bless you!

~MaryAnne

I ussually dont go for nature poems but i really enjoyed this one. :)