by Amy Jun 14, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
All alone in his room |
by nikki
this poem was just too amazing for words so so so so deep and so amazing, i had tears in my eyes, you are now my fave writer on here, your amazing, if you have a spare moment could ya read some of mine? thanks if ya can, anyways brilliant poem!!! |
by Tyler
amy and u told me that u wernt good... u gett over a hunder votes on alot of ur poems... i ahvent broke 20... and even as the days pass the number of my poems go down lol... david better get back >,>... |
by Eibutsina
WHOA! Girl please you are amazingly talented hey that was such an aggressive painting of imagery that i ever read im still in shock - i sent it to every fellow writer i know. Shout outs for communicating domestic violence issues and sparking a dicussion (looking at all your comments) keep it up! |
Wow....Thats The Only Word I Can Think Of For This Poem. I Know What Its Like To Have A Family Member Who Can Get Too Abusive And Hurt Another Its Very Sad And Scary. You Got It Down Perfectly. It Was A Very Sad And Touching Poem. Amazing Writer Keep It Up. |
by David
I love a good traedy, it reminds me of how good I have it. |