Comments : Habbit Repeating

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Ripping,cutting
    Forever burning
    Screaming,crying
    Endless dying

    *This was my favorite part :) It reminds me of one of my old poems. I really enjoyed this. I love how you changed your syntax throughout the poem, that was interesting. I felt you expressed your feelings very well. The flow was flawless. I really enjoyed reading this. Great work hun. Nik :)