Your poem brought tears to me eyes. I can see it came from your heart, so beautiful. Please know your not the only one suffering a loss like you are. Cuz i feel the same. As i read your poem, i pictured everything. And i thought about my loss and relieved to know i'm not the only one. I'm hurting just as you are. Keep up the nice work!

Ashlei

It's always horrible when a friend turns their back on you, not only that but stands there laughing when you get beat up by their new friends. I hope this isn't based on a situation you were in. Wonderful write, 5/5. Em

Ive had to deal with this more then once.
this poem is heartfelt and tells a story that is similar to us all. I really rather you didnt experience this.
wonderful poem, good job 5/5

That poem is nice and neat.