There is always hope. yotube the song "Have you ever" by Shawn Macdonald..youll get your answer what that hope is...
hold on.

Dear you..
This poem started beautifully, but sadly ended disappointingly.
You used beautiful metaphors at the beginning, only that at the end it was cliche.
I want to criticize some things here..

"Swallowin our hopes like they were knives"
^
You mean swallowing right? should change it.

"Walkin the streets like Im lost and confused
Nobody to talk to and nothing left to lose
Contemplating throwin myself in front of a bus
Just to hear the old driver yell and cuss"
^
again, "walking" and "throwing".
"Im" should be "I'm"..I know I'm being too critical but this is important when writing..so bear with me..
The first line needs a dash between "streets" and "like".
The second needs a comma between "to" and "and".
I didn't really like the flow here..rhyme went a bit cliche.

Try to focus on your closures just the same way you focus on your preludes..
Well written =)
Write on~

I liked this poem, they flow was nice, and rhyming was great,
great work
5/5