by Michael D Nalley Sep 4, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
With all the time that most invest |
by Em
Such a wonderful message fortold in this piece. I love the stanza: |
by kelleyana
I like the rhyme in this poem and the flow is excellent. Very well done, kel. |
by Lady Nik
I like this poem alot. it reminds me of my poem "muse-less" Again this poem has an important message and I think you expressed it clearly and well. Another great poem from you :) Nik |
by Alex D
This poem has a great message that you portrayed excellently! there was one or two lines that if one or two words were tweaked would improve the flow but over all the flow is well worked! great job! |