This poem has a great message that you portrayed excellently! there was one or two lines that if one or two words were tweaked would improve the flow but over all the flow is well worked! great job!

I like this poem alot. it reminds me of my poem "muse-less" Again this poem has an important message and I think you expressed it clearly and well. Another great poem from you :) Nik

I like the rhyme in this poem and the flow is excellent. Very well done, kel.

Such a wonderful message fortold in this piece. I love the stanza:
"The desire to learn is a precious gift
That gives a soul such a divine lift
To be the best that it can be
This value we often fail to see"
it rings very true. Written beatifully, 5/5. Em