Confused

by claire   Sep 4, 2009


I don't know where I'm going
I don't know who I'll be
But know I feel lovely
When you smile at me

There's a clear path we're on
We're going somewhere
But til we know where we are
We aren't going anywhere

This is all vaguely clear
But clearly complex
My feeings rollercoaster
At every talk, every text

I want to be with you
Do you want to be with me?
If we can figure this out
It could end wonderfully

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    This poem was as its title suggests confusing yet I thought it had all the good thing going for it rhythm, meter and an understanding of your subject give it an excellent. 5/5 Ray S