Crushed Between Love And Hell

by ChaoticHeart   Sep 5, 2009


Have you ever felt so trapped in your own mind?

Where you feel like your soul is beginning to disappear,

Have you ever felt like you are being left behind?

Because you started to become their biggest fear...

Darkness begins to eat life out of your empty soul,

As love becomes nothing but a figment of imagination.

Your body begins to sink into hell's eternal hole,

As you begin to feel the fires burning sensation.

TBC...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ducky Ramone

    Wow,i almost started crying. ive been feeling like this a little bit lately. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    Please Please write the continuation of this poem. I loved the spacing between the line give give off a speech effect.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    I agree, great job for your first poem on the site :)

    Good job on keeping a constant rhythm

  • 15 years ago

    by cory

    Very well written I thought this expressed the pain of lost love very well. 5/5 keep up the good writing ^ _ ^

    ~xcoryx~

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    These are some strong emotions you have wrote here. I think you did a great job for your first poem, although short it held the emotional aspect that I always like to see in poetry. Keep it up, & welcome to the site.. you will love it. :]

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