Comments : Special?

  • 15 years ago

    by Solus

    I can't remember who said it.....But as the saying goes, "We can't all be heroes, someone has to clap as they go by...".

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    But as i grow older I see

    *I'd change this to "As I grew older I saw" that seems to flow better to me.

    Words fed to
    the ignorant...
    the misled.

    *I loved this stanza. Very simple but so truth. Great wording*

    Not kinda...
    Not sorta...
    Not maybe...
    Not even a little...
    Not even at all...

    *This made me so sad. I loved it though. Again I can relate to not feeling speical, but trust me honey you are. You're a sweet girl with an amazing talent. I heart you :) Nik*

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I love the end, you have quite a nice flow of words in all your poems. this is quite true in my situation good work^^.