Dragon (Cinquain)

by Lady Nik   Sep 5, 2009


Charming
flying creature
lava rock oxygen
rivals the bird of evening skies
Dragons

*Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.*

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  • 15 years ago

    by effervescence

    I liked it :) Good job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    A very great write, I must agree with Cayce 'lava rock oxygen' was a great line, my favorite as well. Really enjoyed seeing you write a form poem, you did an excellent job with the description of a dragon. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Reaper

    Pretty good.good job :)

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Short, but it's supposed to be, so that's good. :] It reminded me of my little beta fish, cause I named him Kaida which means little dragon. I just found out it's supposed to be a girl name though. XD Anyways, I love dragons. <.<

    lava rock oxygen
    -- Definitely my favorite part. I like that combination of words. Especially rock oxygen. It just sounds really cool or something. It's not something that you'd see a lot. It's unique. Haha. Couldn't think of the word for a second. It's too early. :]

    Loved it.

    Keep writing.
    Cayce

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