by Beautiful Chaos Sep 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Call me cruel in your snaky lisp |
by Lonely Rider
Quite an intense write...deep emotions and bits of anger could be felt ... wonderfully expressed... |
by Andrew
Brilliant write, really loved this piece. The sentences work together to build the general concept. Greatly penned. |
A powerful piece that spoke clearly of your intentions. The wording was brilliant and struck me with description and real feeling to get me more into this piece. Well-written, keep it up. |