I solemnly swear

by Sexual hysterias   Sep 6, 2009


Looking back on the past
that we made long ago,
I find the memories were stories
left far too untold.

As I reminisce upon
the love that we shared,
I wish that your lies,
to me you had spared.

Going back to those feelings
that once were so strong,
I feel that my weakness
was you all along.

Thinking back to the words
"I solemnly swear,
I'll be with you forever,
I'm going nowhere."

Just wanting to feel
that undying heat,
my heart and yours;
a harmonious beat.

Wishing and hoping,
that one day we'll meet;
and again, "forever,"
we'll solemnly speak.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Beautifully written.
    i could almost feel the emotions coming off my screen as i the poem.
    It had such a wonderful flow to it like a gentle stream.
    Beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wow so beautifully written with alot of emotion and powerful words, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, excatly the way I'm feeling right now. Oh, love, love...

    Great use of words, and everything flowed beautifully. Keep this up!

    Take care,
    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 15 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    This is really great and yeah. I don't have any reason to write anymore. I don't use it to vent often and the only person who has pushed me to write recently screwed me over so it doesn't matter anymore. 5/5 I must say.

  • 15 years ago

    by Overrated

    Killin em with this one. love it.

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