Comments : I solemnly swear

  • 15 years ago

    by Farrah

    It describes every girl that was inlove with her X!!

  • 15 years ago

    by lovemehateme

    Wow, this was rely good. It flowed nicely as i was reading it and had alot of meaning to it. Great job, keep it up! 5/5

    This stanza is my favorite tho:
    Going back to those feelings
    that once were so strong,
    I feel that my weakness
    was you all along.

  • 15 years ago

    by Overrated

    Killin em with this one. love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    This is really great and yeah. I don't have any reason to write anymore. I don't use it to vent often and the only person who has pushed me to write recently screwed me over so it doesn't matter anymore. 5/5 I must say.

  • 15 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, excatly the way I'm feeling right now. Oh, love, love...

    Great use of words, and everything flowed beautifully. Keep this up!

    Take care,
    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Wow so beautifully written with alot of emotion and powerful words, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Beautifully written.
    i could almost feel the emotions coming off my screen as i the poem.
    It had such a wonderful flow to it like a gentle stream.
    Beautiful.