Unique and an easy read or I should say sing. Your words made me want to do just that. Well done.

Awesome. it sounds like you have a real passion for your music. i love the flow to it. its smooth and (like previously mentioned by Sylvia) easy to read. good job. 5/5.

Excellent poem! I loved it. Thought it really well written, the structure was excellent, such power in each verse, the flow and pace was great too, it all worked really well. Loved the rok'n'roll feel to it, like it was written on a tour bus, with all the dreams and ambitions in mind. :)