by Second to None Sep 7, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I have a story for every mark |
I really like this poem. The rhyme and flow is excellent. The ending was really good to tie it all in and include the title. Great expression! Keep it up, I love your writings! |
by Lady Nik
This one was okay. You said "I have" alot and that made it kind of annoying. This wasn't my favorite form you, but it still good. Keep it up. Nik |
by + Alana
That really good, simple but good, never a good thing but least you can express yourself |