That really good, simple but good, never a good thing but least you can express yourself

just have to change 'I have a from every scare a drop of blood gone'

well done
4/5

This one was okay. You said "I have" alot and that made it kind of annoying. This wasn't my favorite form you, but it still good. Keep it up. Nik

I really like this poem. The rhyme and flow is excellent. The ending was really good to tie it all in and include the title. Great expression! Keep it up, I love your writings!