Aww this is really sweet. some relationships that we share with different people can definatly not be defined by a single word. they are very special to us and forever will be; which is why our love with them will never wither nor die, like you said. your metaphors were great, although not the most original they were beautiful. great work.

This was rely good. I liked reading this. Nicley written. Keep it up! 5/5

Sweet love of mine
never fear for us--
when times seem rough
just open your eyes and
you'll see I'm right here.... This part was my favorite.

Ura rely good writer :D

I love it.. the first block is true... as to what happened last night.. i loved every line of it baby..