Orchid(Cinquain)

by Lady Nik   Sep 7, 2009


Rosy
petals open
to rays of luminous
sunlight surging through slim green leaves.
Orchids

*A challenge from my mom to write about an orchid. Here's a picture of one :) http://hankinslawrenceimages.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/orchid_6.jpg *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Reaper

    Kool.very good

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your mom should be very proud of you, this was beautiful and your words created the scene for the reader, and put them there. Lovely work, keep writing, always and forever..

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'sunlight surging through green leaves'
    ^Only has 7 syllables I believe, not 8.

    other than that this is such a beautiful write, a great image for the reader. vivid imagery throughout. awesome work, keep it up.

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