Nice Haiku. If I close my eyes, I can see that wind rushing past the stars, different colors each time I do.

A very unique haiku, I quite enjoyed this one, the words spoke for themselves. Keep writing my dear. God bless you, Child of God!

~MaryAnne

This was truly a beautiful piece, although it was a haiku it held that beauty of nature all Haikus should have. (: I can see the most beautiful dark sky with different colored stars. What a gorgeous image that would be. I love your imagination here...thanks for sharing!

Rachel
beautifuly done Haiku. Images are great.
Love you
Aunt Cindy

You do love writing on cosmos :)
very unique topic you have chosen... well penned :) I wish I could see the solar winds coloring the sky :)

Weel done. Wording could have been a liitle better I think.

Rachel,
You always have a way of making the most beautiful nature poems, no matter the form you choose. Very nicely done. 5/5

Take Care,
Kay