by Jackie Sep 7, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
This passion and lust I can't control, |
If the eroticism of your poem is fantasy then Bravo because you have a magnificent imagination the comes through your poetry as real. That takes talent. Welcome back Jackie |
by Dreamofolwin
A wonderful write. Good expression... flow, and rhyme! Well done :) |
by Em
Very good description, 5/5. Em x |
by Loulou
Very good! |