I love this...

I love this poem,

Before she would suffocate
Before it would be so late

makes it seem off a little but great job =)

This was a very good poem that is written about someone looking into the mirror and how they want to see some one that they are not and you do a very good job on this. The flow of the poem was descent and the rhyming pattern was constant through out it and the feelings I'm pretty sure lots of other people have felt looking at a mirror and wanting to see something that they are not and once again you did a wonderful job at that. Keep Writing.

Its very nice..
its shows a struggle that it seems alot of us face.

Wowsers this was amazing too! it got to me, made me think bout who i am, who i want to be and who im becoming!! thats what a poem is all bout! ANOTHER GOOD JOB!!
**Bri