A couple typos, but it's very nicely written with a great message. a truely beautiful piece.

Dude,that was beautiful
It has such GREAT meaning,keep up the good work

I reeeally love this piece. This is absolutely beautiful. This is something that you don't see much anymore. I definitely appreciate your faith and the fact that you showed how much respect you have for him. This is probably on my favorites list. I love poems about God :)

As for the writing, great job! The stanzas were well organized and I can definitely tell you put alot of work into them.

5/5 great job!