Part The Feelings,

WOOOOOOOOOOOW!! i don't really know what else to say. i could really relate to this in so many ways. this was truly so deep and heart felt. really powerful.

it had me from start to end. i especially loved "Shaking, Screaming, Endless Pain.
I want to feel happy,
Close this gap," this was seriously so moving because the past couple of years were absolutely hell for me and a lot of my descisions and addictions both literally left me in that state emotionally and physically. and all i wanted was to find the little girl who was once so happy and positive about life.

"Part the feelings with thy hands,
There just too strong to understand,
I can't believe it's falling down,
Down to where my heart just drowns. "

i really liked how you started and ended the poem with hands, i mean yes we make choices with our heart and our brain but we carry out our actions with our hands whether it be postive or negative, a hands touch can be so comforting at times yet at others can leave us absolutely petrified. and its usually from the hands which raise us that we make the choices and get the ideas for what we do with our hands.

and using your hands in the positive aspect of writing is truly so inspirational. rather than using your hands to cut or inflict anything which would ultimitely have negative implications.

keep it up :) you're very talented :)

This was just plain out amazing.
I truly do love it, for real.
:))
you have some real potential in writing poetry, I cant wait to read more!
This just matter affactly caught my eye..And I was like Dayyummm This is a great poem!
haha.
Well keep writing Darlinn; I will keep admiring!
- Jess.

oh.. btw- You are defenitally going in my favorites!

Wow, so powerful and intriguing. Such an emotional poem. Very well written, 5/5. Em

I liked this alot, great work

This was amazing I could relate to it and keep feeling your pain. Keep writing(: