Tick Tock Rest In Peace

by KomBAT Kitten   Sep 10, 2009


The four words still echo in her head
"In four years you will be dead"

Her hearts at ache
Her life is at stake

Theres nothing now that her heart is spent
Whats true or real is lost, and bent

A kiss which was the softest touch
Means nothing now, it wasn't much

When she expires, she will tire
And feel no pain, she will be sane

She hates the past and ache for future
For what comes fast is nothing new to her

I'll scream and cry and say goodbye
But it's too late I'm out of time

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Sorry to say, but i dont like this poem, its deffinatly not 1 of your best. lines are forced, spelling & grammer mistakes, the words used in certain places were in missuse and it was deffinatly not as strongly structured as some of your others.

    maybe another look over this would improve it, but as is it isnt worth reading.

    ~sorry for the harshness of the comment. but when i find a good/bad poem i tell it how it is. it is the only way to improve writting skills.

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