Excellent poem. So beautiful and expressive, such sweet, pure undying love in every well written verse. :) Flawless flow, great pace, was a pleasure to read.

I like how this piece flows and how expressive you are of your feelings. 5/5, Em x

Well done on the rhyming, loved the flow. This poem is full of so much love. Reminded me of how I felt long ago. 5/5