Walah
What a sad heartbreaking piece. Sometimes we can get lost in the sweetest of dreams only to wake to a cold reality.
Excellent job!
Take care dear
Cindy

It is awful to realize it was a dream, not reality but we can hope. Good job.

Aww although we have these dreams and wake up from them realizing it was all just a dream they can still come true. So no reason to give up hope.. right? Great write.

A brilliant write... and a great quote to go with it :) It made me go "Aww" and the end when I realised it was a dream Lol. But hey!... Dreams can come true! :) Keep believing... Great poem. Well done.

Beautiful poem but with a really sad ending. It's never nice to be alone but we do always need our space. 5/5, Em