Wow, love the emotion, its crazy good, your very good at this

+1 i thought this was very well written and strait from the heart. good write!! 5/5

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Another very well written poem, the words were so straight forward and i could feel the pain and emotion in your words... well done.

"don't be afraid of my tears.
they aren't falling for you;
I cry because I wasted time."
I believe that this is what most of uscry about when relationships end. 5/5, Em

Wow.....that was a really good poem. There was so much emotion and I only felt it more as I read on. I hope to be at your level someday :)