Comments : Day In Day Out

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    I honestly wish I knew how to make you happy.
    Reading of yur pain and torture kills me inside.
    Remember, we made a deal to each other we'd call if we had the need to cut?
    I'm always here to help yu, and I promise I will.
    I love you too much to not help.

    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Powerful ending.

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow...this is intense. Very well written, it's a write that alot of people are going to relate to. You've done a good job. I really really liked this poem. Keep it up. 5/5