This poem is just amazing. I liked the way you started it, the first line "How do I explain the many scars upon my arms? " I've dealt with that more times that i would like to admit. It seems like theirs no way to explain it cause it feel's like no one could possibly understand. the rest of the beginning had all those question's and i thought that expressed the pain and uncertainty you were going through very clearly.Like you still had all those question's yourself so how were you to explain it to someone else.And in the middle it felt like you were explaining your battle. Like you were fighting to regain control of it all and figuring out the answers to those question's.It was like you were in a tunnel and trying to get to the other side.the lines "I was human when I bled." and "Ways to cope until I could escape." i thought explained this very well.And in the conclusion it was as if you had won the battle and finally made it out of that tunnel. Like you finally answered your question's and the uncertainty was gone. That's what i thought of it anyway's.I feel like i lived through this poem and i'm really glad you wrote it.It deserves higher than a 5/5.It's just amazing.

x~cory~x

Wow this poem is so amazing.. the feeling behind it is so powerful.. You are an amzing writer.. In this poem i can relate so much to everything you said people just dont understand.. but if your happy with yourself thats all that matters.. keep up the good work.. :) 5/5

See these are the kind of poems are truly love the most. Not exactly the Deep sorrow, but the true emotion. Express the very sentence, the very words your heart wants to show. There doesnt need to be a stanza pattern, there doesnt need to be any rhyming scheme. Its just you and your heart. It was a great poem. I believe it would have been expressed better with deeper vocabulary but regardless of the lack I could still feel the impact. definately a heart felt poem. very amazing. Keep it up.
5/5

This poem was beautiful. I can't really say anything was bad about it. The stanzas weren't all the same, but it worked well. good job.

Great poem everything about it was perfect right down to the last letter.